As I finish up the first half of Twisted 50 stories, organising the spreadhseet for the judges, and offering my thoughts, for what they are worth, I’ve started to pick up an some patterns and have some suggestions for your future writing self (and I will be using these insights too). All written with love in my heart and a wooden stake, just in case.

Simple Sentences
The simpler the sentence, the stronger the read. Multiple commas and semicolons in one sentence dilute the impact. The best communication comes from simple communication.

But how does it feel?
Describe sensations and feelings. The more you actualize your story into something with sensation, the more it will land with the reader. Use delicious language.

Characters with opinions are compelling
If the characters care and express that, the reader is more likely to connect. How do they really feel about what is happening and what would happen if they voiced that? The stronger the expressed opinions (even if internal monologue), the more connected the reader will feel to the character. Think Patrick Bateman.

Find Your Quirky and Unique Self
As the narrator of your story, you are responsible for offering a perspective on the world that is separate from the characters. It makes for a more a contrasting and more engaging narrative.

More to come…